Four Steps to Writing the Perfect Email

Does every email you send get the response you want? Does every email you get deserve a response? We all send and receive a high volume of emails each day, but if everyone were a little better at writing them, they’d be a lot easier to manage. Here are four easy steps to writing an email that can get the job done — whatever the job is.

  1. Make sure you need to send it. Nobody likes getting emails that waste their time. Before you hit “compose,” make sure you’ve done absolutely everything you can on your own.
  2. Write an engaging subject. Don’t be afraid to use the subject line as the first sentence of the email. Tell them why you’re emailing, and give them a reason to click “open” instead of “delete.”
  3. Be straightforward and succinct. We’re all busy, and no one has time for a rambling email. Get straight to the point right up front, and keep the body of the email brief enough to read quickly — or they may not read it at all.
  4. Tell the recipient why they should care (although maybe not in so many words!) Why should this person spend their valuable time and energy on you? Make sure they know why it’s worth it to respond.

Email is a staple form of communication in the business world. But unlike a phone call or a face-to-face meeting, it’s all too easy to ignore if the email isn’t written in the right way. Learning to craft an email that grabs and keeps the reader’s attention will serve you in all facets of your business life!

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Jim Passi
Regional Manager
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1121 E. Main Street, Suite 121
St. Charles, IL 60174
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Email: jim.passi@alamedamortgage.com

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Jim Passi and his team are a shining example of truly taking care of your customer means. The level of personal attention we received through the whole process was amazing. We were in the exploration phase of looking for a home and figuring out costs when we were contacted by Jim, through a personal friend. Unfortunately, I lost my job due to COVID downsizing and we had to put our dream of owning a house on hold. Where a normal person would move on to the next customer, Jim went above and beyond and would check in every couple of weeks to every month to see how we were doing and if there was anything he could do for me and my family. I eventually found a job several months later and the first person I reached out to was Jim. Sure I could have moved on to another mortgage person or company, but the level of customer service that Jim displayed when we couldn’t even get a mortgage due to lack of income made me and my family feel like we were part of the Jim Passi family. Throughout the process of finding our dream home, Jim was in constant contact with us, listening to all of the houses we were searching for and even providing some advice about things to look out for. When we found our home Jim was still there letting us know where we were at in the loan process and what the next steps were so we were always a step ahead of the process. Jim’s team follow his example, by letting us know what was needed and responded quickly. I would definitely recommend the Jim Passi Team to anyone looking to buy a home.
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